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Поделиться22020-10-02 21:53:59
A very excellent story!
A super HOT and well written story. I look forward to many more!
Поделиться32020-10-02 21:54:06
"Spring Break Wife:" - Thirty-four Year Old Mother, Amy Moore and Eighteen Year Old Son, Gary Moore.
Simply put.....this story is just plain fucking Awesome and Amazing. This is ONLY the second time I've read it (woe is me!), the first time September 01, 2014. Major Rewrite has constructed and built a very well written characterization of Amy and her son, Gary. It is romance, it is romantic and it fills my mother/son incestuous wantonness with great pleasure!
I do agree that a couple of words used--dick snot, puss, cunt--were not well placed in this "upper-crust" mom and son romance. Though, I'm a person that expects things to be done correctly, I am totally thrilled this story was perfect for me, in imagination and vividness, with the exception of the several words mentioned before.
The story would have been better plotted had more detail of their love-making and foreplay. But again, I don't consider those omissions to be faults with the story. The characters, their roles and dialogues and sensibilities were very well detailed.
Major Rewrite, Keep On, Keeping On!! You do fantastic, unique mother and son story telling!
Поделиться42020-10-02 21:54:11
Arsehole son.
Still Amazing
This by far your best story and I believe in the top ten on the site.
Отредактировано littlebig (2020-10-02 21:54:15)
Поделиться52020-10-02 21:54:21
One of the best so far
Поделиться62020-10-02 21:54:27
Nicely done!
i liked the story but it could have been longer.
Поделиться72020-10-02 21:54:33
its just math...
mom was 16 and the dad was 20 when she got pregnant.. when the mom turned 34 the dad was 40.. that's some crazy aging if i've ever seen it lol.
great outline but i guess it was a little too rushed for me. its a short story (5 pages) so i could see that.
Поделиться82020-10-02 21:54:38
Perfect
I loved how she eased into fucking her son. She knew he wanted to fuck her from their workout sessions. She planned it perfectly to make it look like an accident which paid off. It is a sexy story that I had fun reading.
Поделиться92020-10-02 21:54:43
nice
most folks think [because of mans laws] that incest is wrong, but think about it for a second. Adam and Eve were the only people until they had kids... they populated the world how? it could only be incest! Then after the flood Noah and his blood family repopulated the earth how? again it could only be incest. there are many examples of incest throughout the bible, so anyone who says it is a sin, or morally wrong, don't know what they're talking about.
Поделиться102020-10-02 21:54:49
Almost perfect
Great story. I love the way the desire builds, the way Gary's natural reluctance to commit incest is worn down by his gorgeous Mom's manipulation. It makes it more believable, relatable, and enjoyable as the sex gets more explicit and intense.
The only part I didn't enjoy is the ending. The idea of letting it go all the way to an inbred child is just a turnoff for me. Otherwise, excellent and well-written.
Поделиться112020-10-02 21:54:55
Could not get past the name issue
Plenty of things to comment on (like the math problem with the age), but the part I could just not get past was the whole name calling. Before her friends arrived she had to keep reminding him not to call her “mom” and to call her “Amy”, but during the trip all he does is call her mom anyway and no one around them noticed?
Поделиться122020-10-02 21:55:02
Still good second... no third... well still good
This is one of the first stories I read here. I go back to it every now and then, one just because it's that good, and two because I keep hoping you add another chapter. It also gets me back to checking your list for more stories.
Thank you for all your writings.
Поделиться132020-10-02 21:55:08
read this sexy incest tale a long time ago, never forgot it,,one of my favs,,revisiting the lust and fun.
Поделиться142020-10-02 21:55:14
Still One Of The Best
I can't believe how good this story is and it remains one of my all time favorites.
Поделиться152020-10-02 21:55:23
GOOD STORY 5***** ^*!^*!^*!
THIS IS THE SECOND TIME AROUND. ..THANKS AGAIN.. USAF
Поделиться162020-10-02 21:55:29
Please add more chapters to this story, please
I looked up a set of photos of April Cheryse. She is fucking gorgeous, so I cannot blame Gary for being seduced by Amy. There no love like the Love of between a mother and son !!! Great sexy story I have to say.
Поделиться172020-10-02 21:55:34
Some times smaller tits are nice. ^*!^*!^*!
IF THEY JUST FIT IN YOUR HAND, AND SHE LOOKS GOOD, THAT'S ALL YOU NEED. NICE READ....THANKS...
Поделиться182020-10-02 21:55:39
Ditzy blond not
Very good story, well written with an interesting twist at the end. Well done.
Поделиться192020-10-02 21:55:45
Fake tits?
Fantastic story; mostly very well written. Hot and delicious. Good ending too; obviously she wasn't the ditzy bimbo he thought she was. And they could have had some fun with the hot Latin beauty, if not the other couple. But why in the name of hell--- plastic tits?
Поделиться202020-10-02 21:55:51
I'd MUCH rather have
a woman with REAL A cup tits than any size plastic tits Fake tits feel like shit. If I meet a woman and find that she has fake tits, she is history,
Поделиться212020-10-02 21:55:57
Plot twist
Damn that plot twist though in the very last capital or rather very last sentence. Very good written.
Поделиться222020-10-02 21:56:05
5 This was very good 2nd time around.
On my 2nd read through I thought the ending made sense. When Gary found out Amy was a good student it should have occurred to him she wasn't the ditz he'd assumed she was. She knew him so playing him like a fiddle wasn't that hard for Amy. She'd rationalize it as being the best for both of them. Gary gets a Sara Jean Underwood type that loves him and will keep satisfied in and out of bed better than anyone else. Amy was done with her marriage if Gary hadn't worked out Amy would have just found someone else.
Поделиться232020-10-02 21:56:11
Ending sucks
Pregnancy business sort of wilted the cock. I do agree a little trysts with the other couple in the hotel room would have been a nice touch.
We need more!!!!
Really enjoyed the story. Only planning on reading a few paragraphs. Went I started , could not out it down. Hope u will add a few more chapters. Let us know how their life continued as they grew old together. The Handyman
Отредактировано littlebig (2020-10-02 21:56:15)
Поделиться242020-10-05 21:23:42
perfect story
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