Great read!
Overall, I liked this story a LOT! Totally my fantasy to be ravaged by 3 super sexy, well-hung men...preferably wolf shifters, lol!

I do however, have questions & some constructive criticism. My absolute FAV genres is shifter erotica, romantasy, paranormal romance, ect. Having read thousands of these type of stories, I knew immediately when the guys used the word “breed”, that that’s what this story entailed. BUT, since there were no other clues given except for in Tara’s thoughts & when Roy bite her neck to “claim” her as his, I think most people are going to be confused about what’s going on. Especially if they’ve never read shifter erotica. It would have been nice (imo) to have included more details about these men-Are they shifters & if so, what breed? Also, Roy kept saying that this was just the beginning of their fun, but there was only the 1 encounter for each man in the story. I wish there would’ve been MORE explicit details & included scenes where they all used her body at the same time.

Because I love this genre, I do hope to see a continuance of this story. Other than the few things I mentioned above, it was a great read.

Oh man this was one of the best reads I've experienced on here, thank you!

Overall? Fantastic story, incredibly hot, though i tend to prefer my noncon to not do the switching to loving it halfway through thing. Thats a personal preference tho. Only real feedback is that smucking is now my new least favorite onomatopoeia word for anything, just.... not sexy, only gross >_<

But seriously a fantastic read

Great story

Anonymous Karens virtue signaling on an amateur erotic story.
I have seen it all. The story was posted under “non consensual”. So, You all obviously came here with the intention of bitching about it. Do you equally bitch about violent fantasies as well? Are you on Horror boards bitching about the torture and murder? If not, you really need to question what it is about you that you feel the need to over compensate here.

holy shit, that was good
My legs are still shaking from the orgasms... she's so lucky

I don't know why
People come to the non-consent page and not expect rape non-consent is rape🙄 like what do you think you'll find? If it's consent it would be in a different page. Anyway love the story would love a follow-up maybe when she's pregnant or just had the baby a second breeding. Only thing I have that's constructive is some of the adjectives are a little off putting like belching makes me think of burping.

Hot! ...mostly.
That was really hot - really caught the feeling of seeing a gorgeous man

The rape threw me, though. Tara was openly interested in Roy, I was expecting them to flirt and start something wild. I couldn't read the page where he suddenly came in and raped her, it turned me off completely. Might be nice if the title made it clearer that this was non-consent.

Oops, rape
Its rape Just because it was her fantasy and ends up accepting doesn't mean it wasn't rape

I’m dripping
My pussy and nipples are sore from the work out I gave them whilst reading your story! Thank you but now I’m jealous because my vibratos isn’t nearly as satisfying as those movers seem to be.

Way overdone!!!
The guys are not just virile, they are magnificently hung . . . of course. What would you expect of rapists? By the way, nobody's eyes roll back in pleasure. That's just dumb. Rape is rape and these idiots are irresponsible rapists, though I admit that to be redundant. There is plenty of room for hot erotic story writing without all the over-hyped crap, though it might require a grown up to do such writing.

Instinctive
Is it just me, or is it instinctive in every woman to NEED to breed incessantly? Perhaps for us mature women, the fetish of being kept merely as breeders is orgasmic! Not just breeders, but the entire sequence, from copulation to insemination to pregnancy and delivery and on to lactation... the cycle begins anew with every seaon.
Bravo! You've captured my deepest fears and my most secret inhibitions, and brought them to light for all to see.
Six stars, dear Sir: five for your story; one, to welcome your baby that I yearn to carry.

I want to move now!
Very riveting! I enjoyed it till the very end. Bravo can we have a sequel? At least more chapters? Does her belly swell? Do they continue to keep her filled and satisfied? I hope they stick around to keep Her sated!