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Поделиться22020-10-02 22:09:53
My excitement about reading your story rapidly shrunk to the size of your dick
Поделиться32020-10-02 22:09:59
Some people clearly have issues suspending disbelief when reading a fictional story.
I bet they complain that wizards and orcs aren't real when they WATCH Lord of the Rings, since they obviously don't enjoy reading.
This was a great story. It was a little on the cheesy side, but the sex was well described. I always love a thrust by thrust play by play. I'm not a fan of mother/son incest, so I lost interest towards the end, but that's just a personal preference. Though I will say, her yelling at her daughter about using her son's room because she didn't recognize him with Amber sitting on his face made me laugh.
fantastic
Отредактировано littlebig (2020-10-02 22:10:03)
Поделиться42020-10-02 22:10:07
hot as hell until it got to the mom ...too much, and a little mystery and fear of getting caught is always good
Поделиться52020-10-02 22:10:13
Very wet and loving it
I enjoyed the story even though it's not real it makes me wish I had a brother like that great read
Поделиться62020-10-02 22:10:22
And I bet most of you who are badmouthing this story favorited it too. Lots of stories on this site read like they were written by a 12 year old but every one of you guys wishes he could **** like that. Fantasy - that’s what it is all about!
Поделиться72020-10-02 22:10:27
Dumped
at the stupid big dick 1 star!
Поделиться82020-10-02 22:10:33
Seriously
I honestly can’t understand all the criticism. For fuck sake it’s only a Fantasy story people. Thank you D. I loved it. End of story... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Поделиться92020-10-02 22:10:38
Why is this story so well recieved?
Seriously reads like it was written by a child. "And then I stuck my 14 inch dick into my sister and she loved it!". No build up, nonsense characters, childish terms.
Поделиться102020-10-02 22:10:43
Hell of a story. Love to read more !!!
Поделиться112020-10-02 22:10:49
This cracked me up
I couldn't even finish it, I was laughing so hard. This reads like it was written by self deluded highschool kid. ' My cock is 12 feet long and 3 feet wide and I can impregnate any woman on the planet with just my imagination! Even die hard lesbians orgasm just from hearing my name!'
Sorry, but this was great, if you meant to make us laugh. If that wasn't your intention, then this was terrible.
Поделиться122020-10-02 22:10:56
Really?
One poster had critiques about the term Phi Jama Jama,but in all honesty that meaning made perfect sense,it was a play on words to describe the situation,not to show grammar errors.
As for Evie(Eva) and the rest I want to say I am glad she learned from her mistakes and apologized to her brother for treating him like shit all those years,now maybe Evie won't take her Brother for granted anymore,and maybe Evie,Amber,Mom,& Dale can grow closer and continue their Incestual Friendship Foursome for many years to come and if Dad finds out either try to seduce him to fuck Amber or Evie so they can become a Fivesome or if he is so disgusted by it let him leave,but hopefully its like the old addage of "The Family That Plays Together,Stays Together" and the can all join into the Family Orgy.That's my opinion.
Поделиться132020-10-02 22:11:02
A Little Effort
You lost me at “Phi Jama Jama”. How hard is it to look up actual Greek letters?
Поделиться142020-10-02 22:11:08
Good story.
I agree about having too much going on though. Mom's story could be a chapter onto itself. His sister and her friend deserve more writing. Your story telling is good. Liked the premise, but I'd suggest maybe taking it up a bit to a higher level. I can see why one reviewer said it sounds like a 14 wrote it. Not a bad thing but.. Practice makes perfect. Personally I'm not into fucking my mother, my sister, sure.
Поделиться152020-10-02 22:11:13
Sometimes a very good story
Could be even better with fewer story threads. While fun and interesting the event with mom would have been better as a new stand alone story.
Поделиться162020-10-02 22:11:20
Ok...
I will say, grammar and spelling was surprisingly on point. Surprising because even with that, it still felt like this was written by a 14-year old boy figuring that this is how things are going to be. Vocabulary and phrases, and most especially that ridiculous self description, read like a junior high paper. The story idea was fun but, grow up a bit will ya?
Поделиться172020-10-02 22:11:28
good
good story but would like more
Поделиться182020-10-02 22:11:33
Big cock? Tall guy? Muscly? OH FUCK ME IM SO WET GODAMN LET ME HAVE YOUR CHILDREN
Поделиться192020-10-02 22:11:38
Awesome Halloween story
Loved the sister, friend, and Mother sex. A little long. but great fuck for sister and friend. Mother should have been on a second story.
Поделиться202020-10-02 22:11:46
Dong size very believable
Fuck them motards ...I happen to know exactly what you sere saying can be very true. When I was 20yrs old, my x-wife checked my size to be almost 10" and the first round I'd go 5 to 15 minutes then usually was hard again in 5 minutes but could go for 3+ hours after that and stay hard the whole time and blow at least 3 more loads. The longest I went was from 6:30 PM till 11:30 PM and only stopped then cause she had to go home. So you none believers go suck on something somewhere, oh and EAT SHIT AND DYE. And quite calling BS on these stories...just like its marked..its fiction motards.. dezurtdawg I thought it was a great story and I love it everytime I read it..I also like part2..keep writing awesome stories please
Поделиться212020-10-02 22:11:51
Not Bad at All
Pretty Good But .. Like it has been Pointed out before .. I am Tired of Giant Huge DIcks Stories ..
The dick size was pretty silly, such a cliche that drags down the story.
Отредактировано littlebig (2020-10-02 22:11:55)
Поделиться222020-10-02 22:12:01
Fantastic
Oh so hot, I love these Halloween stories. I could have done with a little less of him being so invincible so to speak. It was a solid 5 stars.
No he didn't steal this
This story was posted in 2011. That story on the other site was posted im 2012. That person stole this story.
Отредактировано littlebig (2020-10-02 22:12:05)
Поделиться232020-10-02 22:12:10
He stole it....
Yo isn't this the same story from sexstories.com-she started it
Поделиться242020-10-02 22:13:01
Idiotic
Even with your warning at the beginning. I wish there was a distinct scoring scale or category for absurd stories vs imaginable ones so they aren't ranked equivalently in the same group.
Поделиться252020-10-02 22:13:07
Real Life Events
I can honestly say that this has happened to me before but it was an accident I didnt know my older sister was there and i was drunk and she had a mask on so when we did it she actually hasn't stopped coming to me for sex lately but it all happened the same way it did in the story at a frat party than it ended up happening at home to. I don't care what people think but if I can provide that for my sisters than fuck it I love them and they love me.
Поделиться262020-10-02 22:13:12
What a complete load of bullshit. I thought it was great, as someone else said, so over the top, but what a ride (pun intended.)
Поделиться272020-10-02 22:13:17
Great read
I've read thousands of mainstream fiction and scifi. I've read a libraries worth of erotic fiction. I just wanted to say you have the knack for making a Story, Not just word porn. Keep it up.
Поделиться282020-10-02 22:13:23
Tooo Long
There is no need for a story to be that long. This is a story, not a book... Thumps up for the try.
So ridiculously over the top, still I somehow managed to get my pleasure from it all.
Отредактировано littlebig (2020-10-02 22:13:27)
Поделиться292020-10-02 22:13:35
Not dead yet
dezurtdawg here!
Hi guys n gals, just a quick note to let all of you know a few things.
First of all, I AM NOT DEAD........YET!
Besides my writer's block, my ticker started acting up a few years back and after way too many trips to the doctor they figured it out and prescribed meds to help with it. (My arteries are clean, just a non-correctable low expulsion factor. IF you know what that means you have my sympathy.) So I bounced from good days to bad days and the doctor helped to exacerbate that problem with constant changes to my meds. Shit!
Finally had a pacemaker implanted and, that, along with different meds seems to have stabilized things for me. So I've been slowly working on my long dormant stories. Unfortunately, while all of this went on I have forgotten my password to get onto my author's page to upload new stories that I have ready. Every time I ask for the reset password code it turns out that it won't work and thus far the help people here have been NO HELP!
So anyway, wish me luck at getting that fixed. I will try to add this note to all of my stories, or at least the last part for those that are series. Take care, all of you, and don't forget to vote!
dezurtdawg
Поделиться302020-10-02 22:13:42
LOL
Spider-Man fucking Robin... Hmmm; I'm pretty sure there's at least one or two more fanfictions somewhere on the 'net about that pairing..... XD