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Поделиться22020-10-02 21:41:20
Two Much!
Excellent turn to the moms/aunts-on-laps theme. Bravo!
Поделиться32020-10-02 21:41:25
A TERRIFIC story!
I totally enjoyed your HOT story! Well written and a pleasure to read!
Поделиться42020-10-02 21:41:34
Omfg
"Mom was caught. 'Alright. I get it. Playin' around. But think, Jeremy. What if your father walked up when you were doing that? What then?'
'He'd have to wait his turn,' I quipped. Sometimes my mouth moved faster than my brain."
I fucking laughed so hard!! xD
Поделиться52020-10-02 21:41:40
I like your stories. This one was great. You gotta continue with Jeremy and his mother.
He has to fuck her in the ass and go around world, outside, in the park and back yard.
EXCELLENT
Поделиться62020-10-02 21:41:47
My favorite read thus far!
I can't tell you how much that I enjoyed this story. I had first read "sitting on my sons lap," then found yours and wanted to read "Mom takes a Ride" before reading your homage to those stories. I actually enjoyed it more than the first two stories, your story had good humor, and innuendo before the action started, great build up.
I thoroughly enjoyed the competition between sisters, and hope that there is a sequel continuing the competition. Also I think that Colin deserves more than a good hunting story, maybe the story from his point of view, comparatively to the view, maybe the sisters were not completely forthcoming with what Colin received on the ride home.
I also enjoyed it since I am a Texan myself, wondering if the hog hunting was in West Texas around Mineral Wells, or South Texas around Waco, thinking about two hour drives from North Dallas and the 635 reference. Also being a hunter myself, I enjoyed the accuracy (obviously hunt yourself), and the short paragraph referencing the panty wastes that don't hunt, and of course the women's view, which I also will volunteer to explain the desire to hunt, while they are sitting on my lap.
My favorite story yet!
Thanks
Поделиться72020-10-02 21:41:55
Really nice and you-are-there; some typos
Really made me feel I was there in the woods with them!
Some minor typos re: Plural with s vs. possessive with 's
"It is about Aunt's and their Nephews, as well as Mother's and Son's."
Yes, "Nephews" means more than one nephew. (plural)
(Aunt's...what? Mother's... what? Son's... what?)
Aunt's means something belonging to that aunt. (possessive)
Mother's means something belonging to that mother.
Son's means something belonging to that son.
Aunts means more than one aunt. Mothers means more than one mother. Sons means multiple sons (
Поделиться82020-10-02 21:42:00
loved it
i like your writing style and subject matter
Hot One! Please: A follow up to this?
Excellent! Loved the way you build it up. Please consider a follow up: in more comfortable environs.. It will be lovely to read about Mom / Son / Aunt threesome too...
Отредактировано littlebig (2020-10-02 21:42:04)
Поделиться92020-10-02 21:42:11
Excellent Story
Great story, very very hot!
Поделиться102020-10-02 21:42:17
His First
Glad to see it was his mother that was his first to be a man now he better not mess up a good thing. Hope to read more of mother and son bonding.
HOT Story!
Id Love to Read The Next Chapter Thanks
Отредактировано littlebig (2020-10-02 21:42:21)
Поделиться112020-10-02 21:42:40
Jealous of Jeremy
Love incest stories and this one is great. Lucky Dad didn't smell them, but then did he with his last comment?
Поделиться122020-10-02 21:42:46
Personally not down with husbands in these
It's always a boner killer whenever they're mentioned. Like oh yeah this is actually the destruction of a family no matter how fake. Like mentioning the husband is away or in the front seas is one thing but how much of a fuss this specific husband made at the beginning was a little much. If he really had that much of an issue he still could have put his foot down to keep stuff behind and get it later.
Поделиться132020-10-02 21:42:52
FANFUCKINGTASTIC
I could never look at my mother with lust in mind. But once I focused one the activities
the writter had me. Fantastic imagination on the writters part. Felt like I was in Jeremy's place, wondering if Dad had a clue. Anticipation, desire, tension ....the thrill
Of discovery..... the climactic end, its all there.
Поделиться142020-10-02 21:43:03
Wonderful
Great story. Works for me
Поделиться152020-10-02 21:43:12
NICE, VERY NICE. WONDERFULLY EROTIC
I'm not particularly a fan of mother/son incest (perhaps a consequence of issues in my own childhood), but I have been amused by similar mother-son adventures in the past and have generally found Tx Tall Tales's stories stimulating so I decided to give this one a read. Glad I did, early on found myself rooting for both cousins to nail the other's mother on the drive, but actually found the author's climactic dispositions more arousing, only afterwards to be particularly delighted to discover this was merely the beginning of a series. Much entertainment ahead for me I'm sure.
Поделиться162020-10-02 21:43:17
I absolutely love how much detail you put into the setting!! My favourite car ride story yet
Поделиться172020-10-02 21:43:23
Great Story
You made everything seem so real to Me .. My Cousins Dad had a Jeep and Yes I did have fun with Her in the Backseat .We had all gone Surf Fishing that day . To this Day We still remember that Evening . Also happy Her Dad the Ex Marine did not catch us .. Also Glad that We borrowed some of My 3 month old Niece's Diapers .. I then buried them in the woods . No evidence that way .. The best part was stealing My Cousins Panties .. Man was She Mad about that .. But she couldn't tell anyone either ..
Поделиться182020-10-02 21:43:28
Came back just to say
Wish there was a sequel from Colin's pov! Don't shame Colin!!
Поделиться192020-10-02 21:43:34
fucking sexiest thing i have ever read
yh in a nutshell it was the greatest story i have ever read
Поделиться202020-10-02 21:43:39
Great!
The only thing better than finding a story this good is finding out that it's just the beginning of a full series! I was bummed when he didn't get to fuck the aunt, but then realized it was because he was going to get the mom which is even better! I happen to be an ass man myself so the mom is already my favorite. Will definitely re-read sometime but right now can't wait to see what happens next!
Поделиться212020-10-02 21:43:49
Good story except no body could keep it under wraps.
It was a good story, but I think Jeremy should have fucked his Aunt any way while he had the chance. The problem with this story nothing was kept secret from Jeremy's mom because the Aunt had a big mouth and could not keep it to her self she had to blab to Jeremy's mom. Jeremy could even keep the sex with the Aunt from his own mom. Not a good thing it will create eventual big family problems down the road.
Поделиться222020-10-02 21:43:54
incest turned public..
readk 2 pages then your last 2, explain your sexual(ness)everything. didn't explore while gone,,,,
Поделиться232020-10-02 21:44:01
Do enjoy the way you tell a story
Second read. As always, I've enjoyed your buildup and character development. Sure, you took it over the top. It was expected. Women, even drunk ones, just wouldn't screw their sons around witnesses without the expectation of approval from those witnesses. The taboo is too strong. Given that we're ignoring THAT, you have to assume a certain level of incredulity in the story. You, sir, are a writer. Not a scribbler of naughty tales. Thanks.
Поделиться242020-10-02 21:44:10
Two Moms, Two Laps, Two Hours
Very hot story......... until I got to Page 5..........
I grabbed the sides of her shorts, and pushed them down her legs. She lifted her hips up and they slid over her bottom easily. She took over from me and pushed them over her knees letting them fall to the ground.
They are riding down the highway, going home, packed like sardines in the Jeep, and after moving around like a contortionist, Mom pulls her shorts off and lets them fall to the ground but before she gets home she puts her shorts back on??????
Mom would have had to throw them out the window if they hit the ground, so how did she retrieve the shorts to put them back on???????
It's surprising how many authors on Lit have their characters drop, place, throw their clothing on the GROUND when they are in a house, hotel room or a vehicle.
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